Oh my gosh, that is such a good poem, really sad and full of emotion, really deep, I hope everything turns out good for you.

Love ~Jess~

Oh my gosh, that is such a good poem, really sad and full of emotion, really deep, I hope everything turns out good for you.

Love ~Jess~

awww : ( oh my god,that was soo tough,sad,terrible ! am really so sorry
for this,its a great pain i believe you have ! God be with you ,hope he would help you through this pain .

that was really touching !

this was my fav touchin part:

You didn't see him until it was to late
What happened that morning, people call fate
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You took the only one that i love
So now my baby is up above

Oh god,its really really sad :'(
i live the same tragedy,well i lost my baby lovely sister ! and i am trying
to write something really touching about it,am just trying to find some right words!

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

Yes I hope he does feel guilt, because it was his own fault. That guy must be some dumb person. I wanna say really bad words, but I'm not because Janis would be really mad. But anywayz, I hope he went to jail or something, because he has to remember what he put people through. Trust me, my cousin she lost her three sisters in a car crash and my uncle lost his three girls in a car crash. He only has my cousin that lived which was a mircle, because she was a baby, but she lived. Thank god.
But that was a great poem and the best of luck

Love always
Kala dearing

P.S. Stay strong, for when it comes to true love, nothing in this world can stop it. Not even death.

there were a couple of sentences with forced rythming but other then that it was really good. I would reread it after a year and I am sure a better poem will emerge take care...

How very sad:o(

He should feel guilty, very emotianal poem there, well done once again, I havent got you on my favourites but now I definitely will, I should have added you earlier, keep up all the great work

Wow that was soooo sad! I know a lot of people don't think before they get behind the wheel. I have lost 2 friends to a drunk driver. I was in an accident to 9 years ago we were hit head on by a drunk driver in our lane. Scary stuff! We were lucky we all made it out alive but with some serious injuries. Very well expressed! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

Amazing write, it flows very nicely! So So Sorry if this is true...5/5
Much love
-xx-

thanks for your lovely comment =) I voted a 5 for this one.. you're a really great writer...hugs

This is pretty sad, I am sorry about your friend. Take hear t and ane be safe. 5/5

It never, ever pays to drink and drive. I never ever ever have my keys with me when I drink - just incase. I'm so sorry for your loss, I hope you get through it, I really do. If you ever need a shoulder to lean on my msn is on my profile. Great poem, I like the short stanzas, brings your point out better. 5/5

awww :'( powerful poem
made me cry a bit......
well done
5

that is amazing your really great.

awwwww thats sooo sad, but its a really great poem 2, i loved it, great job!!! can you please rate and comment mine 2, thanks

such a good poem!!!!huni u realli rock!!!

nice

wow, i hope this isnt true, its soo sad, but incredibly beautiful, i loved it. be strong hunny
trevor--

wow, thats reall sad and deep.... its a great poem. keep it up :D
love xXlostXx