Painful girl, really painful. I hope you will be okay - people always jump to the conclusion others are okay and perfect. Hang in there and be strong (So cliche i know) but try :D

<3,
||Kalah.

i like this poem because i know how you feel exactly and also because it is just naturally a good well written poem

Feeling so bound
In this life of mine
Theres no way out
Of life's design

Oh hun, that stuck out to me amazingly. I LOVE THAT STANZA! very original. 5/5

Love,
Heather

ps. you want to know an odd but interesting tidbit, your aim sn is the same as my yahoo =) and it's unique, how cute is that? =)

Thanx. and I never noticed that. that is cute.

i think we all have a little bit of this inside, it's natural. 5/5

thanx for your guy's comments I really apprieciate it

this poem is really good i really loved it you have alot of talent and good choice in words i like the way that you write i.m me sometime flavagrl313 or e-mial me please sweet_tart_933@yahoo.com thanks bye bye

*luv ya* -rosie posie

deep elissa, deep. jeez, yur freakin good at writing. this poem describes me as well as you.
love always
harley

Love the flow and the emotion.. Keep strong and keep that head up.. take care (always) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

very nice, i like your writing technique
~*lindz*~

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! it is so good and the thing is i can relate to it so much... dnt gve up hun....