Well, I don't necessarily like the message it portrays; but it does well for a dark poem. I like the sentence fluency and rhyming scheme, it goes well w/ the poem. 4/5.

GREAT Job, Katie, I agree with No Motiv?

Love,
Heather.

hey.....it was good....confusing (for me) but good 4/5
//.:amanda:.\\

The message it portrays is a bit too gloomy for me, but i must say that the poem in itself is very well written and meaningful. I enjoyed it, keep writing,
Satuxxa