by erotema May 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Come with me, and we might be made whole again. |
by Derf K
Now the drama rising and moving in this poem sweeps the reader along. |
by Dorotea©
Wow, what a heartwreching story! The poem, I must say, was written very well and thoroughly. I'm kind of out of breath after reading that. The message was so powerful. It's sad to think of all those soldiers who fight to death and die without even being remembered. Keep writing, |
by ** JeNa **
that was a great poe, u really have talent keep up the good work!! |
Wow that was defiantly different, it flowed really well and had a unique style, I loved it although it's sad. 5* |
by erotema
this poem speaks in a t.s. eliot style about war, and how the countless men become faceless soldiers without any emotion. once dead, these men are so detached that they are not even missed. also, twenty bonus points go to the person who can figure out where the line "'tis bitter cold, and I am sick at heart" is from. |