Wow, that is a really elegantly written and powerful poem, it is very intelligent, well done, keep it up, Btw I love the pic on your profile :D

katie! xxxx

wow, really good, I like it.
~keep it up~
5/5

-no more

this poem speaks in a t.s. eliot style about war, and how the countless men become faceless soldiers without any emotion. once dead, these men are so detached that they are not even missed. also, twenty bonus points go to the person who can figure out where the line "'tis bitter cold, and I am sick at heart" is from.

Wow that was defiantly different, it flowed really well and had a unique style, I loved it although it's sad. 5*

that was a great poe, u really have talent keep up the good work!!

Wow, what a heartwreching story! The poem, I must say, was written very well and thoroughly. I'm kind of out of breath after reading that. The message was so powerful. It's sad to think of all those soldiers who fight to death and die without even being remembered. Keep writing,
Satuxxa
p.s You're in my favorites by now.

Now the drama rising and moving in this poem sweeps the reader along.
Very effective on the emotional appeal.