GREAT job. So original. I was captivated by it. I loved the last stanza, I've related to you so many times. Just stay strong. Much love 5/5

Love,
Heather.

That was different I really like that! Very well written and expressed! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

Wow, that was original, well written and expressive, one of the best poems Ive read all day, I really liked the third stanza well done, good work

original....really good.....actually...really great!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs*

well that is NOT what i expected at all! A really good poem. It sort of had the detached feeling of a lot of non-rhyming poetry but also used rhyme which confused me somewhat to begin with because i can honestly say i have never read anything like it before. A wonderful write and an excellent read.
Brilliant.
Thank you for all the comments.

-ellie