5/5

Another sweet poem and well worded but the topics you have a so personal that you don't have a true voice Try to write something off the top of your head like how you would view something like fire for exsample. Paint me a picture of fire through words. If you want to be a good poet then learn to expand your way of thinking. Think about it...

awww such a nice/sad poem great job...

wow, great poem.. 5/5!!

wow xcellent poem, it reli gt 2 me cus i can relate so much! thanx 4 ur comments, havent gt round 2 fillin my profile yet lol, im glad u liked my poems it means alot comin frm some1 with soo much talent xxxx 5/5

i can relate to this poem

This one was good, but there are some flaws. For example, the flow is really choppy because some lines are so much longer than the others, and some of the rhymes are very obviously forced. Work on that some more. I liked the idea of forgiveness in this poem, because it shows that you're willing to be there for the person even if they aren't there for you. Keep writing, I enjoyed this poem.
Satuxxa

omg i can relate to this so much. it reminds me of one of my friends. Great job! 5/5

Thanx everybody for all the nice comments! It means sooo much to me! ♥

well done .. nice poem! 5/5

this poem was really good!! thanks for your comment about my nature poem...thanks so much for telling me the truth!! that means a lot to me
thanks again

I can relate to that.... meh best friend left me... but I hope you feel better if that's true <3

It's good. Man you really liked this friend did you not?

wow, i love ur poems, they feel like theres a meaning to them.. like i could see most of them being a way that i would feel, you do a awesome job putting ur feelings into words! 5/5 *KISSES*~Corrie

You managed to bring your emotions out through the words that you chose. A difficult task that was well achieved.

Keep Writing
Nici

*Agrees with Corrie*

very very emotional. nice work

very very emotional. nice work

reminds me of an old friend...

Omg! That's also soo good!!! I can definitally relate to that...great job, i love the last line, by the way.