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by Jenny Sys May 1, 2005 category : Love, romance / desired love
These feeling inside, Is so strong and warm, I know that you're thinking, I know that you're torn. Your torn between two, Friends or a woman, But please see, That I couldn't love him. I know he's your friend, But I have all these feelings, Yes, he did hurt me, But now you can start healing. Start healing these broken pieces, Which are being put together, I couldn't hurt you, I promise I mean never. It makes me cry to think, That you are so close, But yet so far, You're just a ghost. A ghost of my heart, Of which I yearn for, I really have feelings, I want to have more.
by catherine
I think it could get better. The rhyming didn't work too well sorry. Otherwise good, it was nice and emotional.
by Amit
Nicely written, very well done. 5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Nidhi's Love, Amit.