Daddy's Suicide

by Laura   May 1, 2005


Your the one that I loved most.
Everywhere I turn I see your ghost.
Why did you leave me?
Abandon and decieve me?
I miss you daddy.
Come back to me.
Please let my torn spirit free.
Without you I am captured by my
own torment and loss.
Now around the house...this new
guy is the boss.
I dont want that daddy, I want you.
Ever since you left my heart has
been ripped in two.
I am having trouble and I dont
know what to do.
Should I keep my life...or take it
like you?
It's so confusing..hard..and tough.
Oh God why did you make my life
so rough?
I think you loved us.
I know we loved you.
You always cheered everyone up if
we were down or blue.
How could you throw your life away?
I almost took mine that very same
day.
I just want to know if you even loved me.
You were my DAD and you always will be.

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  • 19 years ago

    by nadine

    hey my dad died a month ago today (committd suicide) i think that is a great poem and really moving keep up the good work! x

  • 19 years ago

    by Laura

    HEy guys..thanks for the nice comments. i love u all! :) :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥~*Mandii*~♥

    that was a very good poem! im VERY sorry about yr dad... mine isnt dead but he might as well be b/c i NEVER see him and i love him very much! so in a way, i kno it feels! stay strong!

  • 19 years ago

    by «_ĀÐdï©+ïØñ¯»

    im so sorry for the loss of your dad... i'm sure he's watching over you, and knows how much he means to you.. great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by {*LoR`~`LeE*}

    u are really good at poems this ones really sad im sorry to hear if thats a true story, stay strong!! ~laura

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