wow that was powerful~ im sorry that happened to you i know the death of a father can be hard my dad died too and in a sence he kind of kille dhimself (refused to take meds) but if you ever need to talk im here

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~jessi~

THANK YOU SO MUCH JESSI! I'm sorry about your dad too. I really appreciate that comment. It means alot :)

u are really good at poems this ones really sad im sorry to hear if thats a true story, stay strong!! ~laura

im so sorry for the loss of your dad... i'm sure he's watching over you, and knows how much he means to you.. great poem.

that was a very good poem! im VERY sorry about yr dad... mine isnt dead but he might as well be b/c i NEVER see him and i love him very much! so in a way, i kno it feels! stay strong!

HEy guys..thanks for the nice comments. i love u all! :) :)

hey my dad died a month ago today (committd suicide) i think that is a great poem and really moving keep up the good work! x