This is AMAZING girl, totally amazing. Lies can be the demise of someone; quite powerful they are. Well done on this i love it,

"I hold their poison back
To only burn my eyes"

- Intimidating lines, which give me a chill. Nice work :D

Luff Yew Always,
||Kalah.

im ready too.

very imaginitive piece. the reader is held right to the screen throughout the piece. emotionally uplifting as well.

5/5

*sorry im not much for words any longer. sorry for not commenting lately. i appreciate you.

wow...