Fallen suicide

by BloodScars   May 2, 2005


Everyone has the right to care
for the children in pain
but they are to self absorbed
to see the blood in the drain

every little child has hurt in their life
yet no one ever cares
so that little child sits and cries
not stopping once to share

only few stop to see
the bloody razors and cuts
on a child's body
but no one has the guts

suicide the third main cause
of death this year in teens
all because of parents
not hearing their child's screams

1.9 million Americans cut
all because of past life
their parents not there
to see the bloody knife

kids starve their self
to make ppl see
they pull out guns and shoot themselves
so that can set them free

they think there not worth anything
cause when there seen crying
or their bloody pics seen
people just stop trying

i know from experience
i still hurt my self today
all because of screams and lies
i want them to pay

they didn't listen to my cries
or anything else i had to say
so i thought cutting will help
help them understand
their screams and lies turned my world Grey

i don't want to kill myself
thats not my attention at all
but i want my parents to realize
there the ones who made me fall

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    I was getting into it until i saw 'ppl'
    I'm sorry, but slang belongs in slang poems. people is only three extra letters

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Another brilliant write . . keep up all the great poetry work it really is amazing. I hope everything is ok :) xXx

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Thats fu**in crazy and sceary

  • 19 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    That is an awesome poem i love that it describes me in different ways except i have wanted to die so many times but certain people have pulled me through ....i love your poems

    ~angel~

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    WOW!!! My favorite poem of yours...of the site! Really great job on this one and I love the last stanza because thats how I feel to! You are on of my favorite writers and I am going to add you to my favs:)