This is one of ur best poems!! it has a lot of meaning to it... keep up the good work
lylas always,
shortie

wow, that was a really good poem, and i can realte really well, my parents are the same, almost they do worse things sometimes, well a very excellent poem i loved it,
<3 always <3
-Kit

This was very deep.. really good.. i didn't find much wrong wit it at all!! - my b-day is accually this friday, and i just felt really down ( i had a dream about that). lol... Great write though!

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler

wow this was full of emotion... and it sends a very powerful mesage. Take care and I hope that things are working out for you, or at least getting better.

love of luv hayley J

wow thats a great poem your really talented!!!

great poem. it was so full of emotion. 5/5
crystal

This is REALLY good. I give you a 5/5.

WOW!!! My favorite poem of yours...of the site! Really great job on this one and I love the last stanza because thats how I feel to! You are on of my favorite writers and I am going to add you to my favs:)

That is an awesome poem i love that it describes me in different ways except i have wanted to die so many times but certain people have pulled me through ....i love your poems

~angel~

Thats fu**in crazy and sceary

Another brilliant write . . keep up all the great poetry work it really is amazing. I hope everything is ok :) xXx

Peace. [Sole]

I was getting into it until i saw 'ppl'
I'm sorry, but slang belongs in slang poems. people is only three extra letters