I loved this. It was really good, your a good writer keep it up! 5/5
love always,
Elissa

beautiful. excellent. perfect. i love the way it didn't completely conform to a pattern just when you think it's about to (e.g. when you did the "begging for
bleeding for
pleading for
breeding for
you." you expected you to repeat that over a couple times and it didn't, just wonderful) you are so talented. Such a way with words.

-ellie