When You Loved Me

by [r o s ii e]   May 2, 2005


*WHEN YOU LOVED ME*

i smiled everyday..
i looked so nice..
i could give anyone advice

i always was happy..
i was so fun..
you were my boo i was your Hun

i was so lucky..
i was so great..
we had so much fun on every single date

my heart was never empty..
my hand was never cold..
we were so prefect as everyone told

our days were great..
we always whispered i love you
we never had to question if they were true

Five months of yippee..
five months of yay..
I loved you each and everyday

I would never have to forgive..
I would never have to forget..
The cutest couple you ever met

*LIFE NOW THAT YOU LOVE HER*

I always am sad...
I always cry..
I want to just go to sleep and die

I cant smile...
I cant pretend..
How did your love for me just end

You tell me all the time...
How much you love her...
My heart is dead, an angry stir

I cant concentrate...
Find a new guy...
No guy will compare to you even if i try

Guys tell me...
They ask me out..
I cant get you out of my head i want to shout

I hurt so much..
I cant go on adn live...
How can i do that, i just cant forgive

No matter what, it doesnt work..
I just cant keep living life..
How does it feel to be my reason to touch the knife?

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  • 19 years ago

    by xCezx

    i lv ur poem i fink its ace! my lads wiv ma best m8 now 2 but my problem is dat i finished it wiv im n now i want it n e nos it lol. but i lv da poem! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ..::.alreadyGoNe..::.

    hey this one was really good! i likehow it has so muh feeling in it without trying to hard. keep up the good work! 5/5

  • i'm sorry... it was a really good poem, and it showed alot of emotion...

  • 19 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    i really liked this poem...i know how u feel...kinda sucks rite? ::sighs:: well i knoe its hard to believe now but trust me sooner or later u'll get over this---him...at least w/ me i was...well good luck

    <3

    Christina