Wow! Gerard Kurt, Excellent Write, So Wonderfully Done!

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

Amazing.. I loved the way you ended it.. 5/5 nothing less.. I hope to see some newer poems from you soon..
take care and keep writing (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Excellent poem! Great imagery used. I liked like wording as well. Please check out my poem called "innocence". It would mean a lot:)

Ana*

I reeeeeeeeeally like this poem the rhyming is so good and it really creates a visual image, reallly good, your very talented

keep it up
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