great poem, im sorry though.

Aww hun, I'm so sorry that you have to go through this, it hurts me so much!!! You express your pain so well in your poems, I just want to take your pain away!!! Please be strong, things will get better for you...

*Love Sabrina*

As much as you want to believe it so bad sometimes, some people just cant change. They are selfish and do not see that they are not only hurting themselves, but others as well. Stay strong hun, i know you can.
Much love,
-A

awwww hun this is so sad! don't give up you can do it! 5/5 from me filled with great emotion. always here

~PLP~ lil angel~ hugs & love~

I know your game, "father"
It is like the million before,
I'll scream in front of my "mother",
While you beat me to the floor.
I love this part and the way it flows.

i love that poem! its really gd. and i can sort of connect w/ it b/c i have had friend that have been beatin by there family until their very last breath.. 5/5

excellent. i know a friend who has smewhat of the same problem. she just doesnt listen to reason about it. 5/5
~Freak~

Awww hun, please GET OUT OF THERE!!!! You're not still going thru the same $h!+, r u? Please get some help, my "father" was just like this, u don't deserve this bull 4 the rest of your life. U don't need to live through this bcuz u have a life! Please do Ari a favor and help yourself. You're not alone, grrl, ari's always here. PEACE LUV ALWAYS AND FOREVER THANX 4 B N A FRIEND I COULD JUST TALK TO AND SHARE MY THOUGHTS WITH, //ari\\
P.s.-Gr8 poem 5/5 . Thank u SO MUCH 4 the comments! I'm gonna try lookin 4 sum more poems i can comment on for u. :)