I waited along time for you to post a new poem. It's was worth the wait. It's different in a good way. I really loved the ending. This poem makes you think! Keep posting I look forward to reading more! Take Care~! Brooke 5/5

Another beautiful write, keep it up.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

wonderful poem. It does make you think and anytime a writer makes the reader stop, and think about what their reading instead of just hurrying through the lines, its considered an excellant write.........so you did it, I've enjoyed all the poems of your that I'v read so far.....will keep reading. Thanks for sharing. Love ya Becky

beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this one a lot. thanks for your lovely comment on my poem.
much love,
marjan

great poem like your other poems.
thanks for your lovely comment.
much love,
marjan