by Just Sierra
I saw this on bebo hun. Admittedly I didn't read all of it, but I can tell you that the parts that I read really were touching. I hope that you're doing okay~!! Really!!!!! I'm always with you....spiritually....lol. Just don't do something stupid, lol. Love you lots hunny buns. lol!! |
by ** JeNa **
wow that was an incredible poem, ur a truly talented writer, keep up the good work!! please rate and comment my latest "something much more", thanks |
Wow your amazing, defiantly a new fave!!! You style, flow and emotions are so amaazing and touching, iloved i loved it, i loved it(I'll stop now,lol) 5* |
Woah wats this 2 do with georgi r u having problems or sumthin??? |
by lindzy
wow, that's so awsome, and ya kids CAN be so cruel, i kno how that feels, good job though, i like most of ur work so far, keep it up! |
by Aurora
the meaning of the poem sort of changes or you could say that different people could interpret the poem in different ways. anyhow i really like it. |
by Jason Meres
Your descriptions were right on and the scheme of it was solid all the way through, well conveyed and displayed. |
by Robert
You did great until the last that just sucked you really need to work on that last part. Oh well If you get time could you vote and comment on any of my featured work... |
wow this is some powerful stuff! very flowing and emotional loved it! >>5/5<< |
by xRachelx
Hey, hey, hey! |
by Just Sierra
GEORGI!!!! Georgi, Georgi, Georgi!! :-D!! I'm your favorite poet? Awwwww!! :-D!!!!! I looove you soo much! lol! *cyber huggles* lol!!! thank you, my sweet carmel bunny/meatball hoagie with meatbally goodness! lol! |
wow... very visual i felt like i was there! great use of words! this is a great poem, flows well and great sructure! your very talented! >>5/5<< |