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  • 19 years ago

    by Poet13

    well i loved it and can't wait to read more

  • 19 years ago

    by SSBAL

    u write so well, and ur personality and bravery really comes out in ur poems, great write
    luv ya
    jo

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Love~IS~4~LOZERS!

    loved it!!

  • 19 years ago

    by jessie

    o my god that was a really good poem everything about it was perfect! im sorry if that really happened to you no one deserves that kind of thing to happen to them! i know im ony 13 but if you wanna talk my email is : jessicastaples91@yahoo.com
    ~jessi~

  • 19 years ago

    by Wolfwood

    thats an awsome poem, i wish i could write that good

  • 19 years ago

    by DooDee

    THat Was AMAZING ! You desrve a 5 right away ! You write with great flunency and I really loved this one :D
    Keep Going :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Brutal Passion

    u have a lot of skill in showing emotions in your writing...true writers are born with the skill...'n u are one of the few. keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    *claps* beautiful! and very inspirational! My cousin got hit by her boyfriend and she left him instantly.. but women do get trapped.. an dits sad that men seem to think they have so much power keep it up
    KT xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristina

    ~this poems really good keep up the good writing~

  • 19 years ago

    by ~VaMpIrE KiSsEs~

    Hey!
    This is really really good! Would you mind if I added you to my favorites? I could feel the pain while reading this! You put so much emotion into your poems. You are a very talented writer! I hope to become a wonderful writer such as urself! Keep up the good work! 5/5!

    Love always!
    ~*Mya*~

  • 19 years ago

    by redxiii

    very good 5/5 i think its good

  • 19 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    Hey lindsay this is very good. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Antonio Stefan

    This poem is just amazing! Great job little princess, great job ... 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Cindushik

    Nice poem really liked it! Voted Excellent cause it is! Thanks for voting on mine also!

  • 19 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    This one is gooooooooooood!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    that was a long poem but it was worth every word. great job but sorry i cannot read more, i dont have time. keep writing this is good. also, your poems dont have to be true and still come from your heart.. its a nice dedication. good luck

  • 19 years ago

    by steve

    thats an awesome dedication...great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Very good!! keep it up and take care...im glad that this didnt happen to u...
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 19 years ago

    by Seductive

    nice1

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicole

    great poem. keep it up. ur a very good poet. u can check out some of my poems too if u want to!