Confused thoughts running amok

by Sabine Taylor   May 2, 2005


Clouds drifting by
My mind open and free
Till the skyline opens out
Grey and dark the horizon operates
Confused thoughts running amok
In my shattered discretion
When the rain starts falling
My notions scatter
Everything so vain
Fixed on the worst case
That might will never come
That might could happen soon
While a rainbow revives in front of me
Making it all so clear
Let all the problems seem completely solved
Now, so close to satisfaction
A feeling so casual and natural
Just preparing me
For the next time
A rain shower will break out
Right over my head

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Yours Sabine

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    I like new experiences and changes, because they can both be bad or good. We just have to risk it and make a step.
    I like clouds, white clouds more than dark ones, but I also love the feeling when you run through the rain in the summer.

    Yours Sabine

  • 19 years ago

    by Bobby Walker

    This poem made me feel like a rain shower. That's Ok. I guess sometimes rain and sometimes bows. I guess they are together. Maybe I am the rain and you are the bow. Do you like dark clouds? Knowing that the rain will come and wet you.

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