Excellent poem. An excellent addition to this series that I love!!~5

Yeah, nice diction..lol. This was a great one for sure..goes well with your others. Please keep writing. Love, Tim

Hey the flow is amazing! lol, I can see you coming out of the dark moments into something blazing. Good work Waiting for the end of this story!! Take care

Love the last stanza. Beautifully penned, Miss Holly! Keep it up

Love,
Heather

Holly a very excellent and thoughtful poem I really enjoyed the read. I dont know why but your new poems dont seem to show up on my faves list

5/5
Dave.....