the worst feeling in the world IS sitting next to the person you love KNOWING you will never have them. this is a problem i know all to well. i wish you LUCK, be strong. who knows maybe this guy is thinking the same about you?? just a thought. -Holly

i hope you get what you want cuz i know i did keep it up

Good poem. I liked it, but I felt like you were forcing the rhymes at the end. Try chaning the last sentence from "will never peel" to something with the word "real" in it. Peel just doesn't fit in, other than that, great poem.

-Ice

i liked it a lot, and i know how that feels :)

Hey another great piece from you. Keep it up! :)

wow. this is exactly how i felt about my ex until he proved me wrong and came back 2 me. (this is happening right now) i loved the poem. could use some work tho. 5/5

omg, that sounds so like me! awesome job! 5/5

I love it .. awesome job 5/5!

Wow! thats scrary!!!its the exact way i feel about this guy!!freaky...well great poem! keep up the good work!