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by dandy May 3, 2005 category : Nature, environment / nature
The sweet scent of spring lingering in the air. Relaxed and content, I have not a care. This creature beneath me; such strength, power and grace. Flowing mane in the breeze; she's ready to race. Forelock brushing gently over sparkling brown eyes. Dark caverns of affection cannot be disguised. Cantering along the trails among the shadowed trees. Nothing else exists, my mind is now at ease. Pitter-pattering on the leaves, as the mare's gait does slow. Warm moisture falling all around as fire-flies start to glow. There's no comparison to that of riding in the rain. It softens feelings and alerts the senses, while washing away all pain.
by Forever29
Lovely poem. Through your narration I can visualize the mare galloping through the rain. 5!
by Daniel
Awsome 5/5, what else can I say, Amazing!! Keep It up.