Pain

by Love~IS~4~LOZERS!   May 3, 2005


Your being stupid, stop fighting look at me I'm crying turn your cheek kids are dying.

getting hurt starting fight blaming others for long and painful nights

its not worth the pain its all the same don\'t be stupid just don\'t start cause everyday friendships fall apart.

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  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Hi !
    You should've used some punctuations to orgnize the writing ,just to deliver your idea in the right way. : )
    your title was nice,the idea within your poem was nice too

    Good work

    much Respect,
    Rua Francis.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    very good kelsie! i really enjoyed it! keep it up! 5/5

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