Comments : Pain

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    very good kelsie! i really enjoyed it! keep it up! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Hi !
    You should've used some punctuations to orgnize the writing ,just to deliver your idea in the right way. : )
    your title was nice,the idea within your poem was nice too

    Good work

    much Respect,
    Rua Francis.