by PoetPhreak May 3, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
She's see's beyond people and it makes her sad, |
by Pianist
This may seem very critical, but I could guess every rhyme you chose before I read the next line. Which means it was very unoriginal. This can be solved though. Simply buy a thesaurus and carry it like the bible. Rhyming dictionaries also come in very handy. Read some of my work if you get the time. |