Fallen Angel

by PoetPhreak   May 3, 2005


She's see's beyond people and it makes her sad,
because she relizes the world has become so bad.
All this bad will harden her heart and she'll be filled with bitterness.
Shes the angel that is eaten up from sadness, no happiness... she's wingless.

Look into her eyes and you will freeze from her cold glare.
When will someone save her from her dispair?
She means no harm or any fear,
A broken heart and a troubled soul is all that will appear.

Frightened and alone, She's to fragile to be on her own.
Although she might think she is strong and independent if you see deep into her there will only be Fear shown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    This may seem very critical, but I could guess every rhyme you chose before I read the next line. Which means it was very unoriginal. This can be solved though. Simply buy a thesaurus and carry it like the bible. Rhyming dictionaries also come in very handy. Read some of my work if you get the time.