Comments : Entreaty and Disclaim

  • 19 years ago

    by Lyudmila

    i liked that poem, but it sounded kind of depressing to me. did u mean to say that u r hurting (in the poem)?
    well, the poem is actually really good, but it's kinda of twisted.
    ~Lulu~

  • 18 years ago

    by Kalika

    Your vocabulary is spectacular.

    The words flow so smoothly.

    Kalika

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    You have left me speechless which does not usually happen. Very well writen ans certainly very though tprovoking. I like your style and I have added you to ma favorites list!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Great work! you have such a way with words, and such an extensive vocabulary, and unlike some, you actually know how to use it!!!! Wonderfull poem!