by NK May 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Loneliness is sorrow |
by ASPHYXIATED
oh the reason i voted 3 was because it didnt flow that easy and was hard to read...with some work it could be made into a masterpeice like alot of your work...maybe take each lonliness(cant spell to tired) and put it into a stanza? lonliness is ...... |
by ASPHYXIATED
not your best i voted 3.. |
by NK
i saw a one. voted... if ur going to do that please explain why!! |