I can expect nothing but perfect poems from you =)

5/5, as always.

Excellent! So much more meaningful after reading your explanation. Superb!

I agree with No Motiv? all of your work is excellant Love ya, Becky

i get it!!! thanks for the little note. lol. i get it now. n e wayz!! that was very graphic. i imagined some little bug bein born. it was creepy. GOOD JOB!!!!

A lot of people get so caught up in the dramas and meaningless aspects of life that they end up living that boring life....if we could focus on what's really important and embrace it this would be a much better place to live....but i liked your advice at the end....once again, brilliant!

Haha. Very amusing. I do not believe another could tell a better story of the fly. Wonderful, wonderful job.
I loved the entire poem - it is so random to write about a fly, but that you can is amazing. Good job.

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