Great Poem! You have a lot of talent keep it up

THanks So Much You Guys! I'm Wondering Did This make it on the front PAge? Hmm Must have or else I wouldnt have gotten so many votes..lol

fantastic, this was a lovely poem. Im sure your keep writing, you have my vote 5

Amazing poem i love you flow it's amazing i fel this way about some one to it's nice to ./ 5.5

I love that you write not for yourself but for others its really a beautiful thing.

the only advice i have is maybe try to enhance your vocanbulary in this poem i think simplicity was key but sometimes its nice to use bigger deeper words i dont think it takes much to rhyme words like
pain-rain
there-care
there-anywhere

rhyme scheme was lost in certain areas as well

I think this ones very sweet,
i can relate to it for me and my friends it basically the same, i like reading it, 5/5

Very good ,flowed good and had great meaning to it

Aw this is so sweet! i love to read about friendships ....good luck w/ everything ...5/5