It's better to get it out this way, than hurting yourself, you shouldn't pay for something other people do to you!!! I really felt your anger and pain in this one, so well written adn you always have a great flow!!! Great job as always. |
by Jacklyn
glad it feels good to get this out, it's so sad how your parents treat you i wish i could do something more then just feed you encouraging words and giving as much hope as i can. great poem! but it's so sad, just stand up to them keep you hopes, chin and strangth up! |
by EpithetPoet
Stay strong hun. |
by ~*Ley*~
o.O nice. if only all of us cud yell at our parents with such rhymes. 5/5 |
by †JustAriâ€
"Because my life is for me, NOT YOU." Wish I could say that to my mom...anyway, GR8 WRITE, KAL!!! Haha can't tell u how much I luv your poems. Keep it up, grrl, you are so talented! |