Comments : Slip away.

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    It's better to get it out this way, than hurting yourself, you shouldn't pay for something other people do to you!!! I really felt your anger and pain in this one, so well written adn you always have a great flow!!! Great job as always.

    *Love Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    glad it feels good to get this out, it's so sad how your parents treat you i wish i could do something more then just feed you encouraging words and giving as much hope as i can. great poem! but it's so sad, just stand up to them keep you hopes, chin and strangth up!

    ~PLP~ lil angel~ hugs & lots of love~

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Stay strong hun.
    Much love,
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    o.O nice. if only all of us cud yell at our parents with such rhymes. 5/5
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    "Because my life is for me, NOT YOU." Wish I could say that to my mom...anyway, GR8 WRITE, KAL!!! Haha can't tell u how much I luv your poems. Keep it up, grrl, you are so talented!
    MUCH LUV 2 U PEACE IN EVERY WAY LUV YA SO MUCH, //ARI\\ AKA sHADOWsHAWDY