by rachel May 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A young girl sits, face a picture of pain, |
'As she watches her latest cut appear, |
by ღ*KiM*ღ
Wow. Loved this poem. Makes you think what affect this has on the parents. I would give this 5/5. Well done. I loved the rhyming scheme, havn't seen that used often ebfore, was nice :) Kim x |
by Summer
sad..but very good |
Wow! i love this poem u r a very talented writer. thank u for commenting on mine. Kepp on writing ur awesome! |
by RebeccaPower
That was an extremely good poem. Good work. Thanks for the comment. Love ya. xo |