Brilliant poem, really sad, heart wrenching, well done

This poem was a really good way you show how much suicide hurts people, I loved the way a repeated the phrase 'A young girl', it gives a good effect. Good poem. Very touching. Keep it up xxx

THat was a very sad poem! I almost started crying! It wasnt that long, compared to others i have seen! 5.0

thanks for your vote and comment meant so much to me...=D I really like this poem!! Keep it up.. 5 stars ***** hugs from September

wow, great poem!! I love the line "A young girl finds her peace of mind, but at the expense of those she left behind"--beautifully put. thanx for the comment btw!

very sad poem but also very good. 5/5

OOOO hun this is soooo sad! :*( I really liked it a lot though! keep up the great work and I hope everything is ok with you!
Love alwayz....
hAiLy
XOXOXOXOXOX

omg this was so sad. 5/5

Wow an amazing poem! So sad it brought a tear to my eye! Very well written! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

Great poem. Suicide is one of the most selfish solutions known to man. You did a magnificant job portraying the pain, hurt, and fear - not only for the person contemplating suicide, but for family members and friends, also.

That was an extremely good poem. Good work. Thanks for the comment. Love ya. xo
Becca

Wow! i love this poem u r a very talented writer. thank u for commenting on mine. Kepp on writing ur awesome!

Caitlin

sad..but very good

Wow. Loved this poem. Makes you think what affect this has on the parents. I would give this 5/5. Well done. I loved the rhyming scheme, havn't seen that used often ebfore, was nice :) Kim x

'As she watches her latest cut appear,
Deep and red against her vein.'
very good description! good poem! good job on the rymeing scheme too! keep up the good work!