heya hun... bit confused about the guilt part... why do you feel guilty..? i'm sure you will get through all the cloudyness hun, we can do it together xxxx BRILL POEM 5/5!! xxxx LOVE YOU!!!

amazing, hun u have such a way with words, not your best but it doesn't sound like you're at a very strong point emotionally and please know that i'm here for you still and always will be and you can talk to me,
take care please,

-ellie

:*( So sad Toni..Mmm..I'm jus a bit worried for you at the moment, this poem kinda worried me more. I'm not sure what to do for you, I don't knwo what I can do for you. Feelin kind of useless to you at the moment, so yeah, sorry for that. Toni, I know that we haven't got THE closest relationship or anything but, I really do love you and need you, you know? I don't really know what to say Bumweed..I don't think I can even relate to this poem it's that personal to you munch..:( Brilliant poem, sounds like an adult wrote it or a professional..Very nice.
Please, take good care of yourself.
All my love with sprinkles,
Laura.

the first two opening lines were amazing, really kept me hooked for the rest of the poem. brilliant descriptions. 5/5. like i said before if you did wanna talk then im here, stay strong always and take care, luv lu -x-x-x-

Thanku for ur comments x