Beautifully written. Hold strong! 5/5

Much Love
-xx-

omgsh that was so sad it made me cry i am really sorry you have had to go through with that! ill pray for you ok. and by the way you wrote it well- good job

my goodness sakes bless you and he will pay one day i wish i could make him pay today but he will get what is owed to him breaks my heart totally how dare him makes me so grr...bless you sweetie ...

I'm sorry that you have to go through this.. You deserve so much better in life.. I'm always here if you ever need to talk.. Keep strong and take care ((always))..

p.s. : wonderfully written as always..

*hugs*

*> : PainOfOne

No matter how much he hurts you it wont change the fact that your beautiful your a wonderful person and thats what matters. I hated reading that, its not right you shouldnt have to deal with that...just not right. I'm glad prom was fun and i hope soon those memories of yours will subside and allow you to relax a bit. I wish you the best in life and whatever you do bo,
take care,
love- Allen

omg. I hope this poem isn't true. If it is I'm sorry and if you ever need to talk I'm here. It's a great poem no matter what the circumstances. Your a great writer. Keep it up.

omg Andrea... im soooooo sorry... i had tears in my eyes... you don't deserve this!!!! you are beautiful, talented and an amazing person!! don't let ANYONE tell you otherwise. this one really hits the heart... i can't believe he could do this to you... im here for you if you ever need to talk to someone. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-

P.S. AMAZING poem, as always.

I've just read all of them....I'm so sorry:( I hate when ppl talk about you after you really do deserve more credit. I really liked this..even though it was painful and heartbreaking. :( Stay strong<3
Love ya! *Tori*

I want to say I love this poem, I want to say it's eloquent, well written, full of emotion and so much more, it's almost faultless, Andrea, talent beyond your years. But that more is pain and it makes me angry, so very angry.

The positive aspects of this poem, that are rarely seen in your other poems (well, before I had my relapse) let me see a side of you I had not seen before. I'll hold onto those for now until tomorrow morning.

My very best to you, Andrea (I muct come up with a nickname) catch you soon.

B

(just the one post for all three parts as they are one poem)

I must say I felt like I was there, cheering your corner as you stood up to him and gave him his handywork back with vitriolic spit.

There must be at least a small sense of satisfaction there.

Im speechless. i pray to god this poem isnt based on real events..i say thi sbecause not only is it wrong and inhumane, but ive been there aswell. not to that extent, but i have been there. if this has happened to u i hope it isnt a re-occuring event. never tell yourself that you arent beautiful because im sure you are more than beautiful..anyways keep up the good work, god bless you and goodluck to all you do in life..always, Elisa*

Hey did this really happen to you?????
Thank you so very much for writing a comment i hust had to write a comment for you!Any way you seem to only write dark and sad poems how about you write love poems and maybe even fiendship poems it would really be good ones i just know it any way G2G

~ONE~!!!!

I cant believe that poem it was so beautiful that was so well written you really touched me in a lot of ways good job i hope that i run into more of your poems i my experience of being on this site

love crystle