I\'ll say good bye...

by Ashley Van Eperen   May 3, 2005


I'll watch my blood flow
thinking of you
there's no way out
nothing left to do
I tried to say I'm sorry
but I did nothing wrong.
Things will be better
now that I'm gone
Really I did love you
But I have to say good-bye
things are so hard
I can't even try
I look out my window
as day fades to night
I lay down my head,
and let go of my life
theres a note on my dresser,
I left just for you

"Please let me go, this is all I could do. I'm so sorry but Icant, it hurts loving you. All the lies that you told, all the pain in my heart, its way to bold, its tearing me apart.I guess it just took over, and wouldn't let me go. This is the only way, the one that I know. But I have to say I'm sorry. time's almost up. Please dont forget me, because I died for you my love.\"

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  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    5/5
    & OMG this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful
    i cried reading this!

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Good poem...short...

    I like the note part, but I found the poem to similar to others I've read...There is nothing original about it, and therefore it will be hard to remember it...

    Still, it flows well, and the rhymes work out okay...

    The last two lines of the poem was great..

    keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    That is so sad. I liked it a lot, had a lot of good details in it too. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    Ashley i am sorry if my poem offended you...i am a cutter as well...I've cut now for 5 years...since I was 11. And I haven't cut fr 4 weeks...i know how hard it is...yet i know how easy it is at the same time..i was just trying to help

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