Wow great poem. That is so sad that its true. Beautiful way to tell it. Keep it up, Red

omg,wow!!! that was one of the most amazing poems i have ever written. it flowed beautifully and i really really liked it. you have an increadible talent. keep it up..
love cim xoxo

omg,wow!!! that was one of the most amazing poems i have ever written. it flowed beautifully and i really really liked it. you have an increadible talent. keep it up..
love cim xoxo

wow. that was very good! im sorry that is a true story, that is very sad. well, i have read a few of your poems now and i like all that i have read, keep it up and i'll keep reading.xoxo

Katie

Wow that was a good poem I cant believe that is true that is really sad... I feel bad for the little boy growing up the rest of his life with no one to look up to but the people he meets! wow that would be hard

Oh my gosh this is soo good. I'm so sorry this happened..wounderful write though. >3jess

Wow very nice rhymes and a real shocker. great that you made a poem out of this

Awww...That is so sad. Its not easy being all alone especially being at a young age.

omg this is sooo amazing!!!! thx 4 commenting on my poem (i am nothing) means a lot to me. anyway keep up the great work!!! .:lex:.

this is an awesome poem one of the only ones that actually kept my attention the whole time thanks for sharing

this is an awesome poem one of the only ones that actually kept my attention the whole time thanks for sharing

Good job and please keep up the writing!

it happened down the street? that's a little creepy, but it more sad that it's really true. You told the story great tho. i think it had a great rythim (i hate speeling) to it. i hope you keep up with your writing, I love it!

Horrifying! Brilliantly written, packed full of emotion without losing the flow! Well done~Holly

This is a very good poem. keep writing

omg thats horrible! but u wrote the story beautifully! 5/5

thats so terrible that the little boy had to see that!! but its a really great poem
5/5

wow. this is horrible, i cant believe it really happend thats so sad..the way you worded it, its a great poem, but a horrible story. my poem is true the one you commented on. thanks i appreciate that. this poem made me cry,...anyways hugs,-hayley

WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing.

Plz read some of my poems n give me some comment abt how i can be like u in writing.

OMG! i remember when that happened... that is horrible!