by Jacklyn May 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Pitching the ball against the fence, |
by †JustAriâ€
This has really affected me...god, i think i'm about to cry. I luv your poems, cuz most of the time they paint a picture in my mind and they play over and over...This is a really good poem, i've dubbed it 1 of my favorites! Hey, thanx 4 the comment! I luv hearin from u too, havin a friend from far away is nice and i'm glad i brighten up your day. Glad 2 hav U. TAKE CARE lil slam PEACE MUCH LUV KEEP IT UP, KEEP IT TITE, STAY AS STRONG AS U R, AND WHEN U'RE NOT, I'M HERE=), //ARI\\ aka sHADOWsHAWDY aka $!L3n+ @++!+ud3 |
by katie!
Brilliant poem, powerfully written and interesting to read, real tear jerker as well, keep it up |
by Lost Girl
Full of emotion and really great, I'm sorry if this is written from experience....Stay strong |
I can put myself in the shoes of the girl in this poem - you have written a poem which i can relate to, so thank you. It was a very angry piece - Like you wrote this one from the heart. |