I can put myself in the shoes of the girl in this poem - you have written a poem which i can relate to, so thank you. It was a very angry piece - Like you wrote this one from the heart.

Stay strong, Love yah always,
||Kalah.

Full of emotion and really great, I'm sorry if this is written from experience....Stay strong
xxxxxxx

Brilliant poem, powerfully written and interesting to read, real tear jerker as well, keep it up

This has really affected me...god, i think i'm about to cry. I luv your poems, cuz most of the time they paint a picture in my mind and they play over and over...This is a really good poem, i've dubbed it 1 of my favorites! Hey, thanx 4 the comment! I luv hearin from u too, havin a friend from far away is nice and i'm glad i brighten up your day. Glad 2 hav U. TAKE CARE lil slam PEACE MUCH LUV KEEP IT UP, KEEP IT TITE, STAY AS STRONG AS U R, AND WHEN U'RE NOT, I'M HERE=), //ARI\\ aka sHADOWsHAWDY aka $!L3n+ @++!+ud3