Comments : Haiku:Another Day,Another Lie

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Hunny I'm sorry, this isn't a haiku... a haiku describes nature, for example: trees, or birds chirping.
    This is a "senryu".
    Apart from that is was nice, quite enjoyable, a lovely style. About the meaning... I'm not sure. And I don't want to analyse it either. Senryu's are beautiful just to read, not necesserily understand.
    A nice job. :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Psychotic Heart

    The definition of a Haiku: A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, TRADITIONALLY invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
    Yet I'm NOT keeping up the tradition(so NO it doesn't necessarily have to be about seasons,nature). So how is it not a Haiku? Care to explain?! Oh and why you don't understand it is 'cause there's a touch of Metaphor in the poem. Maybe if you thought about the meaning it would come to you:P.

  • 19 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Hmm... The meaning... it sounds like a rape story... but I like it