My first poem

by Just Sierra   May 4, 2005


Behind blue eyes
A sad girl cries
Shaded from the world
Sick of all the lies

Her head is dizzy
And her wrists are numb
She doesn’t know who she is
or who she has become

Images racing through her mind
As she sits on the floor and dies
Wishing to be fulfilled inside
Totally haunted from all the lies

Her mother’s kitchen knife
Her only friend
is lying uselessly
in her cold open hand

Now her eyes will never open
Because she’s too far asleep
Dreaming of how once again
a pain that went too deep.

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  • 19 years ago

    by In_Your_Eyes

    Dark and sad, but well written! Keep up the good work~

  • 19 years ago

    by Clown

    so your seirras friend, thats cool, Names Lance, and I have had the chance to read alot of seirras poems. well anyways, I loved the poem, keep writting, if that was seriously your first poem, it was better then alot of first, room for improvment, but everyone has room for that, keep up the great writting. 5/5, no proplem

  • 19 years ago

    by lindzy

    GREAT POEM! WOW IT WAS AWSOME! keep up the good work!!
    ~*linds*~

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Good to have you and your talent back hun. missed you.
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    was this your first poem ever written? i like it! its very good...5/5

    love always...HuGs

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