lots of emotion captured in this poem. Short, but still awesome. Stay strong, if this poems is saying what i think it is saying, don't do it. Stay Strong, no matter how hard life is, it isn't worth not living it, to get away from everything (if that made sense...lol). Stay strong! 5/5

really great poem...again good rhymes and flow...and I liked that idea u had with the "life"-"sand" thing, if u get my point:)
plz, check out mine when u have time, thx!
keep writing, u're good;) *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

This poem is SO me right now...as much as i dont wanna admit it...it is.....i always say what you dont know wont hurt you.....but it does.....seriously....im sorry......i dont mean to hurt myself....i.....i just cant take it anymore....i cant call you 12 times a week...that just cant happen.......i gotta learn to fend for myself.....you are like my rebound....i can handle it for a lil while but after while.....i can't you live so far away....i cant take it......i need someone to constantly be here.....i know i want you to be here iwth me but you are there not here....i want you to be here but you cant......i wish you were but you not!

sorry i needed to get that out......love ya
Amanda