The Christmas Killer

by Ali   May 4, 2005


"He" had a bad experience
Around Christmas time
"He" peaked
"He" was caught
His mommy killed his puppy

"He" became mad
And burned his mom
His home
To the ground

His siter ran
But he followed
And hid
Til the time was right

Around Christmas time
He kills to ease his pain

However, around christmas
A discovers her gift
"He" comes to kill her
But she stops him
Through her power
And a friend

She wins
He loses
The will finally end
Won't it?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    this had great potential but you really did nothing with it you never gave a clear picture of his torment or anything all and all I thought I was cheated out of a good story. Sorry but I got to be honest.If you get time please look over any of my poems I would be greatful...