by Amit
Nicely written, very well done. |
by R F
unstressed syllables,free endings with a good rhythming.Finally i enjoyed the |
by Gracie Jo
Aww. This was so sweet and beautiful! You are such a great writer! ♥ |
Soo sweet.. Another good one!! |
by ASPHYXIATED
aww omg such a lucky girl!!! great poem!!! truly spectacular!! |
by Ashley Todd
aww that was a really sweet poem . . it seems like something my boyfriend would do and say to me. . aww great job |
by Heart Locket
Wow!! You don't know how much I love this poem! It was excellent! I hope you keep writing like this. I look forward to your next piece. |
by lindsey
AWww.That is so cute..I love it..it's a great poem..good write..5/5.....Keep on writin this one made a tear come 2 my eyes..good one..<3 lindsey |
by Katie
wow...i was speechless after i read that...it was one of the best poems i have ever read. |
by Tonja
OMG! I really liked.. LOVED this !! You are veryyyyy veryyy good at writing. KEEP IT UP.. To tell you the truth you inspired me. |
by EEG
really great poem. if it was inspired by anyone.....she si a very lucky girl!! |
this is a great poem i enjoyed it very much. the girl is very lucky to have someone just like u , keep up the good work and may u always feel as though u r always flyin.<3Zoraida |
Aww .. so sweet. I love it! Good job |
by HOLLY ARMER
Very enchanting poem! So sincerely written....the flow is flawless! Well done, keep it up~Holly |
by Jessica
I really enjoyed the peom. Great job it was so amazing. |
by naida
this poem is really cute =) keep it up |
by Seductive
awe cute! |
by Hard2Heal
Amazing |
by Sarah Beth
Wow you are a great poet! i think i have read almost all of them by now and i have to say i dont think there is one i dont like!!! |