Comments : A Walk in the Park

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nicely written, very well done.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    unstressed syllables,free endings with a good rhythming.Finally i enjoyed the
    Walk :-)

    much Respect.
    Rua Francis.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Aww. This was so sweet and beautiful! You are such a great writer! ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Soo sweet.. Another good one!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    aww omg such a lucky girl!!! great poem!!! truly spectacular!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Todd

    aww that was a really sweet poem . . it seems like something my boyfriend would do and say to me. . aww great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Heart Locket

    Wow!! You don't know how much I love this poem! It was excellent! I hope you keep writing like this. I look forward to your next piece.
    Truly,
    Brittany

  • 19 years ago

    by lindsey

    AWww.That is so cute..I love it..it's a great poem..good write..5/5.....Keep on writin this one made a tear come 2 my eyes..good one..<3 lindsey

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie

    wow...i was speechless after i read that...it was one of the best poems i have ever read.

    if you get a chance look at my poem "fallen angel" plz.

    later

    kt

  • 19 years ago

    by Tonja

    OMG! I really liked.. LOVED this !! You are veryyyyy veryyy good at writing. KEEP IT UP.. To tell you the truth you inspired me.

  • 19 years ago

    by EEG

    really great poem. if it was inspired by anyone.....she si a very lucky girl!!

  • this is a great poem i enjoyed it very much. the girl is very lucky to have someone just like u , keep up the good work and may u always feel as though u r always flyin.<3Zoraida

  • 19 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Aww .. so sweet. I love it! Good job
    Take care,
    - Shell

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very enchanting poem! So sincerely written....the flow is flawless! Well done, keep it up~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    I really enjoyed the peom. Great job it was so amazing.

  • 19 years ago

    by naida

    this poem is really cute =) keep it up
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Seductive

    awe cute!

  • 19 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    Amazing

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Beth

    Wow you are a great poet! i think i have read almost all of them by now and i have to say i dont think there is one i dont like!!!
    nice job matthew!!!