wow, i have no clue how you come up with these but keep doing it! lol good job once again! |
Awesome. That was wicked awesome. I really liked this one. |
by LAST RONIN
great poem, great writing.. I don't know it might be just me.. but this verse dosn't sound right.... |
by VampyraKiâ€
Wow so emotional and amazingly written |
by Natalie84
This poem gave me chills! Excellent write! I love that it flowed so nicely without a rhyme...that can be difficult to do some times. I love the ending as you say he been buried along with your heart. Clever....Perfect!! :) 5/5 |
by Andrea
hmm i liked this one too...5/5 |
by Weeping Wolf
and even though i threw the final blow |