awwwwwwwwwww 5/5. this is such a sad but very good poem. sniff*sniff*. keep writing.
xoxo samara

that was really good. keep writin. hope that you can rate/comment on mine.
*hugs*

WOW omg....that was really sad~ it made me cry~! you are TRULY gifted keep up tha good work- i love how you write- if you get tha chance check out some of my stuff- thanx~!
<3 pocket

Wow, I loved this. Nicely done! -M

OMG this is soooo sad! It's also very well-written! Keep it up! 5/5

Plz comment on mine toO!

omg! This is such a sad poem. Matt, you are a wonderful poet. Is this true? It is a really good poem.

You are great its a tear jerker! Keep it up!

Hey, this is really good...and this is sad...it started to make me cry...made me think about a lot...keep it up and take care..i hope everything is alrite...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow this is a very well written poem. Pure beauty. I loved. I hope it isn't true though. If so I'm very sorry and I hope you're okay. I give it a 5/5 wonderful job. keep up the great work and keep on writing

with love
nicole marie

omg tht is soo sad it made me cry, i loved it...

WOW.......this is an excellent poem...written so well......really sad too....u even had me crying as i was reading this....u truely have a talent...*5/5*
~*~Yasmin~*~

that was amazin 9i just almost teared a lil myself lol. great job keep it okay.

wow! that was such a sad poem, im in school wit tears in my eyes cuz it was so sad....i gotta read it again!

This was so sad but i loved it sooo much! Well done *x*x*x*

omg omg omg omg its soo amazing i love it , u are a good writer hehehe i love it

very nice poem!!! and it's very sad that i couldn't hold my tears.

wow that was amazing, i had to give u a 5...you got me tearing up..seriously WOW!

I don't know if it is my mood, but that was so funny..I burst out laughing. It's a nice poem, I know its not supposed to be funny, but I obviously have emotional problems or something because I think it is. nice work.

Wow, this is an amazing poem! You really packed it full of emotion...I could feel the fear and despair as I read your words! I'm definitely gonna check out more of your poetry~Holly

Oh yeah, in the line:
"I ran to her body and crotched at her side"
I think you meant crouched instead of crotched! :)

deep... i luv it definite 5/5.