Aww this is a sad poem. I love it. I just hope it isnt true.

I said I can't love you, I'm sorry, I tried
It was her left eye that teared, but her heart that cried.

^^ thats a heart touching line. I love that line out of the whole poem. Great job. 5/5

OMG! i love that! outstanding job!!

Omg i cried when i read this... this is an amazing poem very nice job

5/5

Man i am crying it is so good. i love it. it hit me really hard. because my friend killed herself over a boy she loved.

Very, very good story! Amazing...the only thing I would say is that you have some weird uncomplete lines for the sake of rhyming...and she accepts it way to quickly, otherwise this is very good and I can understand all the attention :P great!

Omg i loved this poem really good job

You make me cry..good job. I couldnt belive that there have such a wonderpul author like you.more powers

Omg! This is the best poem i've seeen. its awesome and very sad.
good work

Omg..this poem almost made me cry.

I am actually new to this site and new to writing poetry, but I love dramatic and emotional stuff that moves me, and this definitely was emotional and very deep!! Wonderful job! :)

This is amazing, i almost cried .
good job !

My favorite poem of all time !

Wow! U're such a great talent. Dis 'll definitely enter my favorite list. I love the rhymes. Great job.

Wow! U're such a great talent. Dis 'll definitely enter my favorite list. I love the rhymes. Great job.

This poem inspired me so much! I love it!

Your work, is a great gift to this world. Don't ever stop. What you've written, has such passion. These scenarios are amazing. Thank you, for taing me to places unknown, with just your written words. I can't erase the images you've created in my mind. Great, great, job.

It teared my eyes ... very emotional love it totaly loved it !

I have no words to explain how i feel. That's how good it was.

Why u say this not good.

I like the way u have written,
But it hurt me.
never do like this.