by AJ
Wow, I can really relate. Hope you're ok. Good job. Keep it up and stay strong. 5/5 |
by W H O R E
5/5. I can really relate to this one. Hold strong hon! |
by Lindsay C
excellent job! really really good! 5/5 |
by BRoKEN_
ARSOMEISHNESS.....that was really great hope your doin ok and uhh keep it up!!! ^_^ |
by Chad
Very good. |
by abcede
awesome poem.. because most people can relate!! Props! 5/5! |
by Robyn Park
This was an excellent poem. The only suggestion that I have is that you might change, "I'm not strong enough to deal I knew that all along..." to "I'm not strong enough to deal. I've known that all along." Just a suggestion though. Other than that, this was a very well written poem. Keep it up. |
by Maddie
Very well written poem. With the first stanza i knew it would be another excellent poem. i see nothing wrong with it at all, great job |
by Shy
Very nice |
by Content
I can really relate to this - excellent poem |
by Andrea
good poem. your a good writer |