That was very interesting, I would never have thought to express RED in that way. Beautiful write!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Dang Eirisa I would have never of thought to just pick a color and write about it..the way you picked the feelings and verbs to describe this color really makes the reader think deep about what your saying..well it did me at least! Great Job sis! 5/5 of course
Loveing you and missing you,
~Chelsey~

Great poem! I came here because i wanted to say thanx for giving me advice abt the cory thing! It means a lot to me! ♥ 5.0 on the poem! i really liked it! Maybe you cud check out and comment on sum of my poems one day! PLz and thanx again! ♥

Sure Nada, I'm just trying out new styles and different things with my writing, there is no actual hidden meaning or intent with this piece, which is strange and hard for me cause you're right soooo many of my pieces have hidden depths and meaningful messages. Red is just my fave colour basically, I just wrote down really the first things that came to my head. I really appreciate your feedback though hun and am always up for improvement, can you suggest anything to help improve my poem...besides placing meaning behind it? I would love and greatly appreciate your help with this. Am happy to return the favour also anytime you need :o)

Great job, I thought this was truly a perfect piece. hugs, love, *Ann*

Very creative write. I enjoyed it.
Take care & God bless.

refreshing burst of passion great poem